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Friday, January 14, 2011

POW PROMPT 17



POWPROMPT:from "Clean Straw for Nothing" by George Johnston.
Incorporate the passage from the above novel into your poem if you like or just use the prompt as inspiration.

"...we had been given our own small version of Paradise...everything had been held in a long pause within the sea and the sand and the winds and the high sky,held in the sweet heat of clovered coastal fields, the lantana, the cool-shaded fig trees,the sorghum sweeps. Should we ask for more than this?"

See you here Wednesday.
Drunk For a Penny
Dead Drunk for Tuppence
Clean Straw For Nothing

( A London sign in Gin Lane
in Hogath's time )

The Fall

Is it enough
to walk through
clovered coastal fields
shaded by fig trees
to ride the white foam crest of waves
to watch lightning split the dark sky
to suck the pulp from ripe passion fruit
to watch a myriad of butterflies
raid the lantana bush
to revel in the peach smell
of the solander flower
to bury one's face in the dark pink crepe myrtle
to smell the first plops of rain
on a hot tin roof
Should we ask for more?
We all wear the mark of Cain
so we will anyway
except for the saints
Saint Rallentanda
the patron saint of contrariness
will ask for more on principle

8 comments:

  1. Rall, here and obedient on the eve of the W in POW, Tuesday night on the west coast of America. Wishing to avoid a premature posting of a poem provoked by this provacative prompt so I'll wait for yours and then respectfully follow. Liked your prompt, but it took me in the somewhat predictable direction of a song lyric and the arrangement has a sax. Thanks, once again, for making me think.

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  2. I cheated a bit with this week's prompt... rearranging the words from the passage to make my poem Paradise.

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  3. Paradise calling...
    Own transport advisable
    Waterwings a must!

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  4. Paradise
    Danny Earl Simmons

    We had been given
    our own small version
    of Paradise
    and it came
    with rigid rules
    and shameless shuns
    and petty guilts
    and caramel apples
    served up as answers
    for every difficult thing.
    It came with mindless
    smiles and mindless
    obedience and mindless
    nods that never
    ever stopped.
    It came with Faith.
    We had been given
    our own small version
    of Paradise
    and I said,
    “I'll take Hell.”


    http://dannyearlsimmons.blogspot.com/2011/01/paradise.html

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  5. sorry everyone...my computer is not working, disconnects all the time...will be back when it is sorted..oops it's crashing again

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  6. to: Saint Rall the Longsufferer
    I'm glad the problem is only technical. Not nature with her red claws. Or aliens. One never knows.

    my poem is shortish. http://wp.me/pdTja-1lh

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