Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Monday, January 31, 2011

Rememberances Of Things Past...POW PROMPT 18








I parked in the shaded
laneway to Double Bay Beach
and thought of you
Here is where I met you all those years ago
a tall tanned beautiful blonde
eating huge slices of watermelon
juice running down your polished manicured nails
As it turned out, we were neighbours

I remember
being shocked at your multiple marriages
and then immediately decided to be your friend

I remember
you tipsy on New Years Eve
slow dancing with an American on stage in a cowboy hat

I remember
you in the early hours
wading in the harbour in your silver mini dress
an Anita Eckberg impersonation in La Doce Vita
much to the mirth of the local council workers

I remember
giggling and chortling holding on to the broken handle
of your Alfa Romeo to stop the door flying open
(which you never got around to fixing)

I remember
going to countless art exhibitions and openings
you, weighed down with diamonds and your expensive pedigree
stuffing smoked salmon sandwiches into your bag
Dancing at Arthurs

I remember
you,marching into the Police Station
insisting the Coppers drive us home
because your car was towed away with the dogs in the back seat

I remember
you, giving away the hotel towels to impoverished natives
on Vanuatu
you,almost being arrested at Denpasar airport for
wearing a temple scarf as a tank top
a young Italian waiter waving goodbye in tears
as you left Rome

I remember
you always being so welcoming to me
arriving on your doorstep uninvited
offering that delicious capuccino
and a sympathetic ear

I remember
your house that looked like the aftermath of Hiroshima
strewn with freshly ironed pillow slips, linen handerchiefs
and an ecritoire to write your morning letters on
courtesy of your mother who would only visit
if her cleaning lady had prepared for her arrival
the day before

I should have written

I never did tell you what fun you were
how inspirational your free spirit was
and what a good friend you were to me
You introduced me to fearless and reckless
I'm still wearing all the crinkled laughter lines
a legacy of all the hilarity
from those very exhausting but exciting years

I should have written

I have always been a failure
in expressing my feelings
in soundbites of spoken speech
And now it's too late
Too late
to tell you all of this
To thank you

I should have written

My life should be an exchange of hand written notes
Speaking is ephemeral
Spoken words are will o' the wisp
nowt but fleeting puffs of breath

I should have written

20 comments:

  1. Rallentanda, your poem is haunting and poignant. I really enjoyed reading it.

    Thank you for your nice comments about the two older poems I posted. And thank you for your patience with me not following form. I will do better from now on.

    Here is mine I wrote over this weekend - very time-consuming. (You can save it until Wednesday if you want, of course).

    Thank you for prompting.

    http://dannyearlsimmons.blogspot.com/2011/01/huck-finn-summer.html

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  2. What a grand portrait.
    I like the conclusion you reached. Now, even more, the tactile letter has real meaning.

    My poem is
    anserine

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  3. I've put a poem on Alias Jinksy tonight, as it's early Wednesday at my end!

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  4. Thank you Danny.There is no place to leave a comment for your poem on your site. The ending of your poem was particularly poignant...not overstated but nice innuendo!

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  5. Thank you very much. I guess I don't know how to link from here to there. I appreciate you making the effort to go there and read it.

    Take care.

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  6. Jinksy sent me instructions on how to link. Here's a go...

    Huck Finn Summer

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  7. There's something adrift with your Mr Linky link on Poetry Pantry, Rallenetanda - it doesn't open to your blog at all. Perhaps because the comment you left was anonymous, they don't recognise you? Would you like me to try and put it in again?

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  8. Thank you Jinksy.

    Sometimes our Jinx
    is a blogging angel
    so helpful
    and sweet
    she sweeps you off your feet
    She pretends she's a techno nudnik
    but I know she's really a technical wizard
    and her second cousin was Einstein!

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  9. i feel like i am right there with you and her in reading your beautiful poem. i want to meet her. or maybe i want to be her. thank you for sharing her with us!

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  10. What a delight to link to your blog and see the vistas of a most beautiful place open up around me.
    I remember...
    I should have written...
    These recurring lines sum up the bitter-sweetness of your poem.

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  11. This is such a lovely and sad poem. It read like a classic movie to me. Wonderful writing indeed. I so glad I stopped by. xoxo Nith

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  12. WOW! What a poem! what incredibly fantastically rich memories. What a Persona she was. I was wowed from my very first glimpse ofyourblog. I love the sea, so the photos drew me in, and then what a rich wonderful story to read! Absolutely stellar.

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  13. Really touching, and a reminder that me must take advantage of opportunities to let others know how we feel.

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  14. Oh, this was so visual and evocative. I loved it! A wonderful piece of writing. :-)

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  15. rallentande,
    What a delighful blog to find alongside your superb words.
    I enjoyed losing myself within your story.
    Best wishes,
    Eileen

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  16. Thank you all for your generous comments.
    My friend died of cancer a few years ago. We lost touch for a number of years...busy life, moving around a lot,change of husbands,change of social circle, different domiciles, my children were grown, hers were still young etc
    and by the time I was ready to reconnect it was too late...thus this poem.

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  17. Great narrative poem...really cool. It pulled me in deep.

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  18. well penned story.
    smiles.

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  19. Welcome Join Jingle Poetry Potluck week 21,
    Feel free to share 1 to 3 old poems or random poems, cheers.

    Love your talent demonstrated here,
    Hope to see you share.
    xxx

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