Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Shadorma





feels like home
not quite sure why it
feels like home

looks like home
too far from shore to swim it
it's just beyond reach

B&P's Shadorma and Beyond
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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 4, 2015 at 7:13 PM

    Gorgeous song ... gorgeous response :)

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  2. SusanNovember 5, 2015 at 5:35 AM

    Nicely done, Shadorma, and song of tranquility. In the poem itself, there is something disturbing about the "too far from shore to swim it." I hope the narrator stays on the shore.

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  3. Jae RoseNovember 5, 2015 at 5:38 AM

    Yes - the song and video are perfectly echoed in this poem...sigh

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  4. Carol CampbellNovember 5, 2015 at 8:03 AM

    Your words add a depth to an already very profound song!

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  5. Sanaa RizviNovember 5, 2015 at 10:31 AM

    Perfect! :D love the form too :D

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  6. VictoriaNovember 5, 2015 at 8:18 PM

    The image of home just beyond reach touches me.

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  7. Bastet's Waka LibraryNovember 6, 2015 at 10:16 PM

    A moving write Rall .. and what a song. Bastet

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  8. Sherry Blue SkyNovember 7, 2015 at 11:02 AM

    "Just beyond reach" - so poignant, while listening to the clip. That is one very affecting movie.

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  9. Adas AlcoveNovember 9, 2015 at 6:19 AM

    Very Nice!

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  10. IntelliblogNovember 10, 2015 at 9:36 PM

    Oh I do hope that it is not beyond reach to swim to, Home... The tranquillity of drowning is not really a good tranquillity to aspire to!

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