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Interlocking Rubaiyat
jealous that her dear old hubby
fancied a gorgeous slim bubby
a sweet conniving spring chicken
young firm and not at all tubby
the plot alas does now thicken
he becomes love sick and smitten
performs the forbidden sex act
his future dire and now written
the stupid self indulgent prat
again breaking the marriage act
got caught out red handed of course
his betrayed wife livid in fact
she sued him for a quick divorce
with ferocious explosive force
made sure he was bankrupt and broke
her revenge destructive and coarse
Rall, you certainly got the form spot on! And this was clever and funny! - murisopsis
ReplyDeleteRall, I like how the funny tone makes the wife’s fierce revenge at the end feel even stronger.
ReplyDeleteMuch love,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com
I like the "ferocious explosive force" line. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThe form seemed so effortless for you I did struggle - brillant piece🙌
ReplyDeletehi, Rall❣️
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Much love,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com