Rallentanda

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Friday, November 5, 2010

Miss Pommeroy Breaks Out



I'd been thinking old loves
It was hot and humid weather
The hook sunk deep into my delicate bone
A perennial problem with ill fitting under garments
I want to burn my bra
Time to trade my straight jacket for a backbone
and let it all hang out
I want my bones to shake and dance loose like opals' milky fire
on the dance floor at one of those clubs
where happy hour spills over some nights
where nirvana happens to someone puffing a cigarette
of the exotic middle eastern variety
This evening is for leaving all tension behind
And then he walks in
It wasn't a sight anyone expected to see
my wild dirty dancing girations
His eyes were riveted on
my mounds of golden rod studded with ironweed
quivering like a couple of circus wheels in motion
He said" your eyes are sanctuary for my heart "
Uh oh, this has happened before- I know the signs
He is not looking at my eyes
At this rate we could end up
our bicycles leaning into the rain

12 comments:

  1. Lines taken from
    Deb, Sandy, Rachel B, Irene, Robin, Joyce Ellen,
    Barbara, Nan, Amanda and S L Pencil of Big Tent Poetry.

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  2. *chuckle* Love the way you used my line!!!
    Sounds like Pom-Pom is having a grand time.

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  3. Perfect, perfect. I'm so glad she did...it was high time.

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  4. Great compilation, Rall. "His eyes were riveted on
    my mounds of golden rod studded with ironweed" is definitely a line to borrow!

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  5. Thanks all. I'm inclined to get a bit crazy and frisky at this time of year.

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  6. You did a great job using these lines and crafting one rocking poem.

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  7. Oh, Rall, the sensuality of this poem is palpable. Wonderful use of lines! One has to get a bit frisky when it rains!

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  8. this is so cute... well not cute maybe Merry is a better word it has the feel of an old movie like this pics in your side bar. It is unique how you managed to use so many of our phrases and keep the same feel throughout the poem, so well done!

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  9. Love the simile of Barbara's "mounds/" Wow. Who knew?

    Way to make all those lines your own!

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  10. Thenks gels. Just a bit of summer silliness!

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  11. Your silliness trumps an awful lot of serious.

    Don't know why you'd have trouble commenting on Briarcat. It's just the look that's changed. At least I don't think I screwed around with the settings.

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