Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Sunday, June 21, 2026

TANKA TUESDAY CHALLENGE NO 70.....LAI FORM







music filled with heart
beauty love and art
lovely
you broke us  apart
the hurt still kicks start
deeply
meet again we shan't
bridges burnt we can't
sadly

6 comments:

  1. You lai is lovely and well done, Rall. - Eugi

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  2. Great poem Rall you got the immense feelings of loss that a broken relationship can cause 💔 The music is lovely too 💜💜

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  3. Hi Rall that was my commitment... willow 💜💜🙏

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  4. Rall, I think this is excellent. In just a few words you said so much. 🩷

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