Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Tuesday, October 20, 2026

TANKA TUESDAY # no.87 CINQUAIN

 


husband's
kitchen romance 
he loves what she's cooking
she likes dancing so she cooks what
he loves


it's spring
here down under
the gals look pretty in
their fresh floral frocks ha
yeah sure

the gals
are still pretty
but do not dress like this
a shame really i quite like this 
old charm





10 comments:

  1. I like your take on dressing differently :)

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  2. Lovely pieces, Rall! 👍☺️

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  3. I remember the days when people dressed up more, and took pride in their appearance. The image in the first poem is so sweet.

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  4. Lol Rall ...you see the life as it really is... lovely thoughts ❤️

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  5. I love these - especially the first one 🩷

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  6. Both poems are wonderful, Rall! I love the first one the most.

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)

    yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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  7. Nice one, Rall. Girls do make a pretty picture when they dress in floral dresses. That's one of the things I liked during my visit to Norway- seeing girls in pretty dresses during spring.

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  8. Rall, I really enjoyed your cinquain poetry!! Your take on women wearing romantic dresses touches that bit of whimsy in all of us girls! Fabulous writing. 💜

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