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Wednesday, October 14, 2026

The Skeptics Kaddish... W3... # 233

Stanza 1
Introduce a character who finds something unusual or strange.
Stanza 2
Show what happens when your character uses what they've found
Stanza 3
Bring the story to an unexpected realization



he noticed her eyes lighting up
when he entered the room
he found her irresistible

they had a lot in common
similar interests much to talk about
he was overcome with a wild delight

until he took her hand
saw the wedding ring
his dreams came crashing down




5 comments:

  1. I'm wondering how this man feels about it after he saw this wedding ring... Great story, Rall 👍

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  2. The heart-breaking low after believing you have found something special and to find you can't have it...

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