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Wednesday, January 30, 2019

Dark Secrets




afterwards
they moved away
to a far flung outpost
on the planet
the furtherest they could get
to forget
never went back
there was no talk of it

she was born later
in the escape zone
a free zone

a  cocoa cola drinking
bikini wearing surfer chick
growing up near a white sandy beach
under electric blue skies

but she  always knew
what she was never supposed to know

how could she know
was it idle talk assimilated
when she was still in a cot
maybe it was the look
on her nana's face
when she saw the blue numbers
on the deli lady's arm

nevertheless
she felt all of it
she always knew

somehow
she had inherited their terror

Midweek Motif Poets United
“The darkness is really out there. It’s not something that’s in my head, just. It’s in my work because it’s in the world.”— Margaret Atwood





11 comments:

  1. Oh wow! That close packs a punch.

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  2. To inherit terror is a shadow of the darkness that once was. Well put.

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  3. The numbers, yes. No amount of sun can stave off the terror, no matter how we vacation in it. We know what is possible. This is a gentle way of hitting us with that punch!

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  4. What a chilling video, with the little mustachioed man and his minions parading down the Champs Elysees...and the Arc de Triomphe, where I have stood, conscious of the ever spinning wheel of history. This is such an intriguing poem. I want to know her and the secrets she harbors. The Margaret Atwood quote at the end is perfect.

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  5. Oh woww this is absolutely chilling to the bone! I can relate to the inheritance of terror.. Nicely done!

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  6. Yes. That kind of trauma is generational. We see it in Canada in the descendents of First Nations who survived residential school. This is an important poem. Children absorb everything.

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  7. Love that last line Yes I do believe terror and darkness can pass on on a different level. We all inherent some of it

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  8. Interesting surge into the gene pattern. Intriguing poem

    Much💟love

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  9. You were lucky to have missed the war but fortunate to have your Nana's experience to inherit. Sadly ordinary people are often cannon fodder for leaders ambitions. But when deliberate bias against colour, race or religion is evident you know that a cruel selfish tyrant is in power.

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  10. I like the way your poem at first seems to be a terrifying vision of a dark future, but is actually a reminder of the dark and not so distant past, Rall. We have indeed inherited that terror.

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  11. Terror definitely travels in the blood.

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