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Saturday, June 24, 2023

Sundays with Rall # 3

 Poetry with pics



a red beetle

an item 

in the long list

of things

i wanted but never got

                                                       


got one of these

for a birthday surprise

smiled for weeks and weeks


podiatrist's dream

client with a sense of humour

time on their hands as well



irresistible little angel

keeps the ladies clucky

and the world turning



baby it's cold outside

inside as well

when you can't afford heating


it's your birthday today

so many things unresolved

that flowers could not compensate for

nevertheless

i will always remember you


old money

new money

soon there will

no money

just cards


Poets and Story tellers United


10 comments:

  1. If it is your birthday, I very much hope it is happy with many more to come. Coins might be replaceable but there is only one of you.

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  2. Thank you Penelope. My birthday is in October.

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  3. Each of these is a gem.
    It was a black E-type Jag I always wanted and never got. My first car was a little yellow(ish) Beetle.
    That is indeed a particularly adorable baby's face.
    For all of us, I think, there is someone who didn't work out, whom we'll never forget.
    Nice to see the old coins, I still have each of those stashed away, too.

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  4. Nice ones, I like the take on the image of the couple (if they are a couple) on the train best.
    My first car, with my late husband, was a red VW, but not a beetle, a Karmann Ghia. Wish I still had it, it was fun to drive, once I learned to use the stick shift.

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  5. I love each and every one of these. The first one is extra relatable--I wanted an ivory beetle with red upholstery.

    The "irresistible angel" warmed my heart. There is something so soothing about babies...

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  6. OH the Red Bug!!! Of course we had one. I drove it during the year hubby was in Vietnam 67-68 with four little ones on board. We kept that VW for years after. And the phonograph, what wonderful memories. Great bits of poetry, Rall.

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  7. I liked every one, I've lived some of those myself. My Beetle was an ivory colored1962 with a cloth folding top. My birthday is October 30, day before Halloween. I don't use coins anymore, just coins or rid myself of them in the collection plate when I do get any. I didn't ride a train until I was drafted into the Army and had to be transported to Fort Chaffee. I too was in a poor farm family growing up, rode a horse to high school three miles away for Freshman and Sophomore years.
    ..

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  8. I remember the phonographs and typewriters that were sold as "toys" but really worked, sort of. You had something to smile about for weeks! What fun!

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  9. Each one is really a an art piece...loved them

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  10. These are all excellent. The record player really brought me back.

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