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Rallentanda

Wednesday, June 19, 2024

Whats Going On ....Snow White.. Cinquains

 

 no way

i'm not sleeping 

with  any of you dwarves

one day a prince will rescue me

i hope

 

oh dear

this voice is not 

 going to lure a prince

a voice that could cut glass causing

migraines


snow white

a fantasy

some found out the hard way

fairy stories are not real life

just tales


like love

romantic tales

great to watch on tv

in reality does not last

for long


princes

 come at a cost

and far too high a price

some gals are not lucky in love

ever

 

  meanwhile

 find other gems

that make your life worthwhile 

meaningful treasures bringing joy

real love







10 comments:

  1. I smiled all the way through this and heartily agree. I so enjoyed this poem! A fun read, containing some home truths. Smiles.

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  2. This made me smile my favorite part...

    princes
    come at a cost
    and far too high a price

    maybe, you have to meet a lot of frogs until you find the prince...

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  3. "princes
    come at a cost
    and far too high a price" Indeed. I like how you start the poem with the 7 dwarfs vs. a prince, and then deflate the idea of a prince. Good stuff.

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  4. Why wait for a prince when you can celebrate the small pleasures of life! Jae

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  5. The first one made me laugh, Rall, and the second I totally agree with. Why did Disney give Snow White a voice that could cut glass? It’s true, though, princes (and princesses) do come at a cost.

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  6. Lovely lines. The last stanza is precious.

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  7. Great lines and i like how it progresses. Good Stuff.

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  8. A wise poem for sure!! thank you annell

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  9. "a voice that could cut glass causing/migraines" Haha! So true. Among many truths in the poem, Rall.

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  10. Gosh.. looks like one line caught many of us.. "princes come at far too high a price" that authenticity strikes home and is a perfect response to the "undoing" of the "fairytale"

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