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Saturday, November 7, 2026

SENRYU SUNDAY NOVEMBER 8TH

                                                                           



 WELCOME TO SENRYU SUNDAY


SENRYU  5 7 5
focuses on human nature and behaviour

A senryu is a short, three-line Japanese poetic form structurally identical to a haiku (typically following a 5-7-5 syllable pattern), but which turns its lens toward human nature, everyday ironies, and relational quirks rather than the natural world.

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ENJOY!

 

 

 

 

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unbelievable
our friends lived here in New York
in this very street

(Rall)
 
This is one reason
We moved to San Francisco
To escape the snow
 
( Fandango ) 

walking in the snow
expecting to find somewhere
nowhere to go
 
( Aptivi) 

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coloured bibs and bobs
bits and pieces strewn about
clutter dust and mess



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Gosh that's a surprise
what has grandpa been drinking
Grandma seems quite shocked

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used to be cheap digs
a row of terrace houses
now are worth millions

 

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wintry wonder scenes
street lamps set the mood magic
a cold frosty night
( Rall)
 
no one knows the way
yet we follow little lights
through the massing dark
(AJ Wilson...Ange )

wispy wintry scene
cold nights frosty nose iced toes|
please don't remind me
(Nancy Richy) 

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she had lots of fun
no wonder she was called the 
giggling gertie saint

( Rall) 

saint among the cats
no sermon could ever match
the warmth of a purr

(AJ Wilson...Ange ) 

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the poor kid never 
got to disney land spent all
summer on the beach



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generous neighbours
hard for musicians in flats
bagpipers do well

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 when i was a child
most of our friends had pianos
now they all have cars

( Rall )

ivory dreams rest
in the heart of polished wood
one touch brings them home

( AJ Wilson...Ange )


11 comments:

  1. Thank you so much, Rall! Hope you like it ☺️
    https://aptivisjoyfulcorner.wordpress.com/2026/11/08/senryu-sunday-nov-8th-2026/

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    1. Thanks for joining in and using the illustration Your senryu is included with the pic.

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  2. here is mine https://therapybits.com/2026/11/07/senryu-sunday-nov-8th/

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  3. Great senryũ Rall - https://poetisatinta.wordpress.com/2026/11/08/senryu-sunday-10/

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    1. WOW three this week! Loved all of them now included in the post.Thanks.

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  4. Grandma actually looks delighted. LOL. I love the sermon never matching the warmth of a purr. True. Love in its purest form.

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  5. Ciao Rall! Here's mine: https://theelephantstrunk.org/2026/11/08/the-big-chill-a-senryu/

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  6. Thanks Nancy . Your lovely senryu has been included.

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  7. Here is my senryu for this week, Rall.
    https://mymindmappings.com/2026/11/09/sunday-senryu-no-more-snow/

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    1. Thanks for joining in Fandango. Your Senryu is up and running, Good idea moving to San Francisco...Brrrr!

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