Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, February 28, 2024

Whats Going On ....not just a cup of tea ... Friday Writings # 116...Lasting Impression


 

when you were home

(which was not often

you were mainly at sea)

 

 


 

 

you left a cup of tea by my bed

every morning 

it remained untouched

i never drank it once


one for nana

one for mummy

one for me

you did it

so i wouldn't feel excluded


you used to fill a  cigarette tin

with two shilling pieces 

for my pocket money

 

 


 

you took me to an Elvis Presley movie

when i was thirteen

because all the other girls

had seen' Blue Hawaii'

except for me

(my mother thought Elvis was uncouth )

 


 


no it wasn't just a cup of tea

it was love

i was loved

i was blessed

and i didn't realise it

until later on when

i came across so many

throughout my life

who were not

 

you will always remain in my heart 

i will love you forever Grandpa

 

 


 


 

 



 




21 comments:

  1. What a beautifully touching poem, Rall. Your grandpa definitely knew how to SHOW love, not just say the words!

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  2. This poem is so touching. You are right, so many grow up not knowing they are loved. What a wonderful Grandpa you had. A beautiful poem. I had a sweet one too. He was quiet and could sound gruff but it covered his tender heart. He had twinkling eyes for children and would put a small envelope with a shiny dime for me in his letters to my mom.

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  3. Your poem was a lovely surprise, Rall! Intimate and nostalgic, it touched my heart and reminded me a little of my own childhood, much of which was spent with my grandparents, especially:
    ‘you used to fill a cigarette tin
    with two shilling pieces
    for my pocket money’.

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  4. Love it, so heart-felt, i could touch the emotion.

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  5. Good Grandpas are the best! I had one too.

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  6. Sincerely written and relatable. Too often we don't know love until we learn its opposite.

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  7. You have painted a touching, lovely word poem about a man I know was special .. because you told us so.

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  8. Beautiful reminiscence recalled for the things that were important...the cups of tea...

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  9. a beautiful ode to your granddad and yes you are blessed xx

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  10. ...and this is me, crying. So many memories, all spurred by a simple cup of tea. Thanks, this is lovely!

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  11. A wonderful grandpa. It's so true, we don't realize what blessings one person bestows until later when we come across so many who do not. Well said!

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  12. A beautiful love song for a beloved grandfather. A blessing indeed.

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  13. Oooh this brought joyful tears to my eyes.. the love .. the tea.. the love... simply beautiful!

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  14. A cup more than tea, a gift of love, life, and care. I could feel the emotion i it.

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  15. Few things are as glorious, as learning how much we are loved. What a treat. Thank you for sharing it.

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  16. 'nother grandpa tale of love and care. We often don't know what life gifts us without asking.

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