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Friday, October 22, 2010

Storm Over Sydney by John Trantner

It has been storming here this afternoon. My favourite poem came to mind and I thought I would share it with you. Beare Park, Elizabeth Bay is the park referred to.




Blustering over the Harbour,brilliant rain
slaps and blathers at the rusty Bridge.
I dodge for cover as the sky turns green.
Cars wobble and skid on William Street
hot with mechanical rage.

Lightning strikes twice: a blinding white
crack! and the echo whacks the concrete.
I fossick and dawdle in the supermarket aisles
safely underground, among the paper plates
and the jars of honey.

The thunder has trundled a thousand miles
and boiled the Pacific black to bother us all,
and it's dull and sick from its long journey.
Now I'm trying to wheel a crook trolley
from the shopping mall.

the chrome's rusty and a bent wheel clanks.
It's the season of ruby cellophane and holly;
the gutters are chock -full of summer hail
fresh frozen and smashed into chunks.
At the cafe I doze

in a corner,read the messages and the mail,
and unwrap the book I've bought. It's old,old:
the writer's fervour whispering down the years,
epigrams elaborating a narrative-
as though such fragments could!

On schedule, the weather grumbles and raves
westwards over the suburbs. I'm happy; I know
a little park where I can park the car,
sit on a wet bench and watch the waves
fume in the amethyst air.

11 comments:

  1. Weather`s very similar here today so I think I might take myself off to my favourite beach and watch our waves `fume in the amethyst air` - if I`m not back by next week better call the Coastguard as I may well have been swept out to sea - which will be your fault entirely R for making me read such atmospheric poetry! Have a good weekend.

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  2. Very sensory and great words! Hope the weather's brighter today.

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  3. Nana, you go carefully now...all that Scottish dancing and wailing to the moon could get you arrested. Derrick lives on the Scottish border so I'll send him to save you if you get swept out
    to sea..He's a strapping lad and good for that sort of thing.He told me the Scottish police force all look like Sean Connery and wear kilts.
    I think he might have been pulling my leg.

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  4. I love stormy weather, even close up. That poem sounds like my favourite weather.

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  5. These powerful words keep tumbling out..no wonder it's your favorite.."hot with mechanical rage"..many lines to quote..I love a good, raging storm, as long as I'm indoors, close to the window!

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  6. A grand combination of lyrical and descriptive power!

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  7. Thanks Lyn and Marianne. John Trantner is a fine Sydney poet...and a nice person as well.

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  8. Loved the use of the word 'blather' in this context - just what I do when a wonky wheeled shopping trolley plagues me! :0)

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  9. Nothing worse than a crook shopping trolley.I almost always get one.The trolley fairies are
    agin me!

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  10. The things that they waste energy and effort on like weapons and space travel, and they can't even invent a reliable trolley or hearing aid.

    The best poem I've read in a long time.

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