3WW evade wedge buckle
He was being very evasive
slouching cool with a drink
glancing furtively at himself
in the mirror
running his fingers through his
thick mane
practising moves
driving a wedge between us
I didn't like the cut of his jib
But the message on his belt buckle
seemed appropriate
The party peacock here is his own party pooper! Great poetic narrative!
ReplyDeleteGood one.. I had to look at buckle again..
ReplyDeleteWonderful! Made me chuckle!
ReplyDeleteNicely done ;) Like Ramesh I had to take a second glance at that belt buckle..Jae
ReplyDeleteYou got the 'Lounge Lizard' down to a 'T' - awesome, funny and true!
ReplyDeleteLOl. Love your poem! And my goodness, the photos on your blog have me thinking vacation! cheers
ReplyDeleteha...what a hoot...yes appropo indeed...
ReplyDeleteHa! I know that guy!
ReplyDeleteExcellent!
ReplyDeleteFunny! Haven't we all run into this charmer at least once in our lives?
ReplyDeleteI could see the scene! :-)
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed your use of the words. :-)
More than once Sheridan!
ReplyDeleteMight be the same guy Kim :)
Thank you all for your comments.
Wow!! Beautiful!! Both the use of Prompts and the pictures as well!!
ReplyDelete~Happy New year~
Enjoyed that. Funny.
ReplyDeleteThe world is full of people who think they're special, eh? Loved it. Also enjoyed the little piece below it about living your own life. An excellent New Year's resolution more people should make.
ReplyDeleteNeato . .
ReplyDelete........dhole
He took the wrong tack, eh?
ReplyDeleteSometimes you don't even need a BS Detector. They just announce it right up front.
Ha,that's right Peter!
ReplyDeleteThat glorious buckle makes me green with envy! How I'd like to be the proud owner of one of those! A comment on life, the universe and everything!
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