Rallentanda

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Saturday, December 11, 2010

Stuffed




3WW ..nightfall judge safety

The rainbow lorikeets
jump like hiccups
on to my feet
What has that judge been putting
in those bread crumbs?
They will soon head off
to the safety of the trees
before nightfall
stuffed with bread
like little fat chooks
returning hungover tomorrow
for another feed

2 comments:

  1. good one....the prompts have been neatly put and d poem is creative and expressive. i loved d pic too :)

    sarah

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  2. like the idea of these guys hanging out in the tree stuffed and satisfied waiting for tomorrow..

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