Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Immigrasi

3WW...behave jettison mob

thinking poetry
in the immigration queue
not a good idea

don't behave this way
drawing too much attention
haiku not worth it

your cut glass English
will not fit well with the mob
jettison grammar
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5 comments:

  1. anthonynorthDecember 1, 2011 at 12:47 AM

    Enjoyed them. Especially the last.

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  2. Jae RoseDecember 1, 2011 at 2:02 AM

    They always make you feel guilty don't they..queues of any kind..should you overplay being normal or just go bananas and bypass any queue..I love your style..Jae

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  3. rallentandaDecember 1, 2011 at 4:32 AM

    A queue always makes me feel like a sardine:)

    An official at the end of it with a uniform and a gun always makes me feel like an espionage agent without a cyanide ring.

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  4. barbaraDecember 1, 2011 at 8:52 AM

    "cut-glass English" Nice.

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  5. Cassiopeia RisesDecember 1, 2011 at 11:12 AM

    Loved all three sets of Haiku. Well done. Very interesting blog.


    Melanie

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