Rallentanda

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Wednesday, November 23, 2011

Le Magicien

3WW shallow hollow misery

at least
there is
nothing hollow
or shallow
about le magicien

his thrust and parry
slices razor sharp
running one through like onion rings
making nurse misery
look like mary poppins

no-one could possibly like him
except me
please keep safe
i know you will never leave me

5 comments:

  1. onion rings! oh my. makes me think of the way onions come apart, how it would be as le magician thrusts and parries. You can have him, I don't want him. (that's a lyric in a country music song)

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  2. you're no good
    you're no good
    you're no good
    baby you're no good

    that's another lyric in a country music song:)

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  3. "running one through like onion rings" is a very satisfying line.

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  4. It may be a satisfying line MAS but it certainly isn't a satisfying experience i.e. unless you're a masochist.

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