Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Sunday, January 15, 2012

Becikang Makta Manggala (Be Careful with the Boss)

3WW...sliver downhill freak

SENRYU FOR ALL EXPLOITED WOMEN WORKERS

an over ripe fruit
split crawling with fat maggots
perverted lulu

massage and a fuck
i will give you 2 dollars
pretend i am god

andih like bojog
i am a bubul purus
and i am your boss

a sliver of kindness
is unknown to control freaks
weeny puffed peacocks

it is all downhill
if the girls yield to these pricks
if they do or don't

17 comments:

  1. 'massage and a fuck'..I love your work Rallentanda..she who dares to speak for those whose voice maybe smaller..Jae

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  2. Thank you jaerose. It is hard and very upsetting to believe that this still happens in certain parts of the world in the 21st century.

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  3. so sad that there is still so much abuse in the world.

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  4. it is indeed upsetting that it happens

    reality is hard

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  5. What utmost sadness there is to read your words where need and poverty are exploited by the ugly and cruel. Thank you for shouting out!

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  6. Interesting piece about a sad topic.

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  7. This sickening situation came to my attention just recently. Fortunately I was able to help the girl until she finds another job but I can't help them all!

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  8. I really despise men who take advantage of women. Your anger is righteous and I thank you for voicing it the way you do.

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  9. Weeny puffed peacocks describes this trash perfectly. I like to think that the low lifes who victimize the innocents will be punished in due course, but we all know it doesn't work that way.

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  10. dang strong words...speak it...good on you for helping her and capturing a bit of her story to tell the world....

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  11. Monica,karma works! This guy will get his comeuppence.The not so funny joke is he prays three times a day, goes to endless numbers of spiritual ceremonies, is in constant touch with his spiritual leader,is preparing to be a priest and has been harrassing this young girl on a daily basis for 8 months.

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  12. This is sad ... and to know that some times the whole situation is hopeless... one has to give ones best shot when one comes across... Usually these kind of men are cowards...

    Shashi

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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  13. On you! Too much of it. Far, far too much.

    Isabel x

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  14. Hard hitting and disgusting situation but you captured it so well with your words.

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  15. love your words Rall....assholes of all kinds out there...nicely done

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  16. Thank you for sharing.

    http://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com/2012/01/its-only.html

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  17. Very strong use of the prompts. You've described this scum so well. "a sliver of kindness is unknown to control freaks". So true.

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