Rallentanda
Wednesday, February 15, 2012
Lovelies
3WW...angelic foster ruin
to foster
good relations
and not ruin
his financial opportunities
he told her
with his angelic smile
that he needed
some time to himself
that he was on a journey
of self discovery
to get in touch
with his spiritual side
that of course he loved her
as he nervously fingered
the airline tickets
crammed in his pocket
for two
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the hinge point here is if she actually believes him...what a jelly fish he is...
ReplyDeleteOuch, are there really guys this soulless. I feel sorry that you had to meet one. Great snapshot of soulless headonism, all wrapped up in spiritual drivel.
ReplyDeleteugh...good she gets rid of him...he's not worth her love...nicely penned..
ReplyDeleteImmature and spineless. She is so lucky to lose him. Now she can really start her life again.
ReplyDeleteWhat a dog..hopefully she will earn her own bling! Jae
ReplyDeletewhat a creep.this well written poem telling the story.
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