Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Sunday, February 19, 2012

Tankas

Wit

she had it in spades
and offended so many
while loving it all
the picket white fence brigade
sharpened their points attacking

she fell in a heap
decided to write flaccid poems
about bruised petals
the picket white fence brigade
sharpened their points attacking

she got up slowly
gave up poems took up crochet
it was not enough
the picket white fence brigade
sharpened their points attacking

4 comments:

  1. I loved the expression "picket white fence brigade" like hyenas picking everything off the bone. Doesn't do to stand out in a crowd like that.

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  2. Yes, great phrase..It brought to mind 'Desperate Housewives..' mind you in strong hands a picket can be wielded against these numskulls..Jae

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  3. Hell yes--you can never win with those people.

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  4. Most wonderful, thoughtful take on life
    and giving up.

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