Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Saturday, December 1, 2012

Haiku Heights

 
thunder clouds rumble
eyes flash lightning bolts of pain 
hell hath no fury
 
like a woman scorned
the thick black sky bursts apart
unleashing demons

14 comments:

  1. One hears of it, yes! In reality there are occasions when this happen. Seen it! Nicely Rallen!

    Hank

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  2. so women are demons? works for me :-)
    linking two 5-7-5 verse to make a renga (connected-song)

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  3. Yes... you have described one way in which a woman can use her power. Well done

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  4. GREAT take on the prompt. The very haiku was like a storm

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  5. I like how the thick black sky bursts apart and demons are unleashed... brutal...

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  6. Stand far away from this type of storm ... I have whipped one or two of them in the course of my life!! Nicely done ...

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  7. What a raging storm and fire from the woman ~

    Good one ~

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  8. speaking in tongues
    oh fie, miss, you must not kiss
    and tell - the thunder

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