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Friday, December 21, 2012

Haiku Heights




snow is sun's lover
melted by her loveliness
to a mere puddle

hey let's go skiing
Val d'isere on Christmas eve
see you there gorgeous

be my snow lover
i will bring the sunshine and
you can bring the booze

16 comments:

  1. Enjoyed your trio - especially the first.

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  2. If it wasn't for the snow, it would be perfet!

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  3. T'is a pity Cosmo me luv..guess I'll have to pencil you in for the tropical adventures.

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  4. Do try to stay away from beaches during said adventures .... loose particles can be hazardous!

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  5. A fun tale, it gave me the smiles ~

    Wishing you Blessed Christmas ~

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  6. You are being a very blue duck Dodo. Keep this up and you are in danger of being served up as Christmas dinner.

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  7. Oh my! Thank you for the smiles. Especially enjoyed the first! Merry Christmas to you!

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  8. Not advisable!
    According to a contemporary account the Dodo "... is round and fat, few weigh less than fifty pound. It is reputed more for wonder than for food, greasie stomackes may seeke after them, but to the delicate they are offensive and of no nourishment."

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  9. Well in that case my little roly poly feathered friend you must contain your blueness when visiting moi of delicate disposition:)

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  10. I will my dear.

    A Christmas wish for you.

    Nollaig Shona Dhuit

    “The light of the Christmas star to you,
    The warmth of home and hearth to you,
    The cheer and good will of friends to you,
    The hope of a childlike heart to you,
    The joy of a thousand angels to you,
    The love of the Son and God’s peace to you.”

    Doodles x

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  11. Doddles, mo buiochas o croi for the lovely poem and Christmas wishes x

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  12. Now THAT is what contemporary haiku is all about. Your voice is unique.

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  13. Lovely. I like the first one a lot.

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  14. Enjoyed reading these - good job.

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  15. loved these haikus. the last one made me smile.:)

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  16. i loved the visual imagery in the first one the most :)merry christmas !

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