Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, November 19, 2014

Dusk



a sad time of day
heart sinking with the sun
another night without you
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7 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 19, 2014 at 10:28 PM

    Heartbreaking ----

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  2. Adas AlcoveNovember 20, 2014 at 4:58 AM

    in my dreams you come to me
    your breath warm upon my cheek

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    1. rallentandaNovember 20, 2014 at 6:13 AM

      Oh you've turned this into a lovely tanka...thank you !

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  3. MarkNovember 20, 2014 at 5:40 AM

    I've had nights like that...more than I care to count...

    Creeping Dusk

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    1. rallentandaNovember 20, 2014 at 6:10 AM

      Oh well then, there is no excuse for not writing more heart wrenching love poetry :)

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleOctober 23, 2016 at 9:23 PM

    How sad this sounds ... fits the feeling of autumn.

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