Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Sunday, September 20, 2015

Haiku Horizons



after you left
it was never the same - you're back
but i still miss you
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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2015 at 5:38 PM

    much emotion in so few words

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2015 at 9:33 PM

    yes --- the ache here --- nicely done

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  3. Ramesh SoodSeptember 21, 2015 at 1:39 AM

    This is amazingly put.. You must be missing yourself too... Is it?

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2015/09/after-thought-haiku.html

    RS

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  4. UnknownSeptember 21, 2015 at 6:19 AM

    painfully delightful... :-)

    http://drishti.co/2015/09/21/eternal-hope/

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  5. UnknownSeptember 21, 2015 at 6:39 AM

    Brilliant!

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 21, 2015 at 11:12 AM

    Wow, really thought provoking Rall! Nice one. :)

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  7. Milan RajkumarSeptember 21, 2015 at 11:55 PM

    Wonderful ! You are so romantic at heart Rall !

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  8. Reading PleasureSeptember 22, 2015 at 9:57 AM

    Hmm! Deep!

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  9. sunaina sharmaSeptember 22, 2015 at 11:49 AM

    oh the pain of parting.....

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  10. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2015 at 12:05 AM

    What an emotional haiku. It really captures that pain of separation then of trying to get back together.

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