Oh, nicely done!
what a charming haiku. The line "not to fly away" is perfect
Oh ... how beautiful this is Rall!
O wow Rall , I was thinking the bird struggles to fly away and just the opposite happens ....and it interpretes the first line ! That's the o wow moment ,right ?
oh how beautiful....can actually feel the heart beat....!
Ah beautiful!! you have captured this photo so well...we can feel the fast heartbeat at the tips of our fingers.
Wonderful write and beautiful picture!!
how beautiful... the picture is lovely :-)
Your poem leaves me a bit breathless.
Oh, nicely done!
ReplyDeletewhat a charming haiku. The line "not to fly away" is perfect
ReplyDeleteOh ... how beautiful this is Rall!
ReplyDeleteO wow Rall , I was thinking the bird struggles to fly away and just the opposite happens ....and it interpretes the first line ! That's the o wow moment ,right ?
ReplyDeleteoh how beautiful....can actually feel the heart beat....!
ReplyDeleteAh beautiful!! you have captured this photo so well...we can feel the fast heartbeat at the tips of our fingers.
ReplyDeleteWonderful write and beautiful picture!!
ReplyDeletehow beautiful... the picture is lovely :-)
ReplyDeleteYour poem leaves me a bit breathless.
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