RALLENTANDA: The Southern Cross

Monday, September 7, 2015

The Southern Cross

bright and distinct
at the bottom of the world
the southern cross

carpe diem haiku kai

the saucepan
boils over spills into
the milky way

4 comments:

UnknownSeptember 7, 2015 at 11:19 PM
Very sweet Haiku. Illoved the first one.
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Adas AlcoveSeptember 8, 2015 at 8:12 PM
Nicely done!
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Bastet's Waka LibrarySeptember 10, 2015 at 4:57 AM
Like the idea of the saucepan boiling over ... and I miss seeing the Southern Cross in the sky .. a lovely reminder!
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JaniceSeptember 10, 2015 at 9:55 AM
amazing....
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