a seamless design
intricate patterns
in harmony together
remove a petal
and the flower will know
she can read your thoughts
carried on the wind
the full moon
beams on you tonight
will wipe away your cares
sweeten your dreams
how do i know?
quelqu'un m'a dit
Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous.. !!
ReplyDeletelove the way you've incorporated the song line rendering the poem a sweetness...
ReplyDeleteThe second verse reminds me of plucking petals from daisies seeking the answer of the love me/love me nots...the flower knows...
ReplyDeleteI especially love "remove a petal and the flower will know." Yes, she will. It pinches! Smiles. She likely gives a silent scream as well.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful poem - woven, crafted.. Full of heart and soul... If the right person tells us then moonbeams will definitely take away our cares
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful Rall...but just who told you?
ReplyDeleteVery lovely.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteZQ
Who told you? You have a secret informant who guides you to write such beautiful poetry. I knew it!
ReplyDeleteHa...my secret is out !:)
ReplyDeleteLovely poem! :)
ReplyDeleteLovely words. Have seen the tiles in situ - so blue you can cut it.
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