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Friday, October 14, 2016

Sunday Scribblings 2



a birthday celebration
a cork popping
champagne symphony
roses
beautiful fare
beautiful weather
lovely surprises
a long time coming
and appreciated

this annus horribilis
has taken its toll

finally
smiles sunshine
a slice of happiness
for a few precious moments

overnight and over the moon
away with the pixies riding high
spring tipsy'd
her mind fizzing with champagne bubbles
she wrote  - revealing her heart to him
in a thank you note
spilling words she swore 
would never escape
her inner sanctum
or sneak past her lips
on to a page





next day
waking up
to  the blurred late morning light
a techno lit


sign emblazoned
flashed before her eyes

one click
of the send button
is all it takes
to make a complete
fool of yourself










13 comments:

  1. Do a Donald and deny it ever happened.

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  2. I like the idea of being spring tipsy'd - if only it stayed in that happy middle ground of intoxication!

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  3. Haha! How often have I had those moments of over-gratitude when I made an outgoing mail instead of a journal entry? Now I carry my notebook and haven't purchased a smart phone. Call me old fashioned. But I also felt the tenderness of aging in this poem--no laughing matter.

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  4. overnight and over the moon
    away with the pixies riding high
    spring tipsy'd
    her mind fizzing with champagne bubbles

    Love this!! 💖

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  5. Ha, I know that feeling. Hitting Send can be risky.

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  6. This is great! I love the images throughout it that bring the poem to life.

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  7. Brilliant, that extra glass takes the do I, don't I hit then send button away. And this made me smile too.

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  8. Don't drink and write - well, you can write just don't send until the morning light..

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  9. Hahaha yup! Although I hate homework sometimes when sober I have to re-write, revise, or throw away. :)

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  10. Oh, yes, the Send button can lead to terrible regrets. I've pressed it. I know.

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  11. Oh dear, we all know that one! I learned not to, long ago – and not being able to over-indulge any more helps. :)

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