seeking for nature's mysteries
a new day rises -
after a long and steamy night
she departs ... without a kiss
Chevrefeuille

he feted her for years
she relents -reveals her love
his mission accomplished
flees like a startled gazelle
marathon runner of the year
carpe diem haiku kai
Ah, great take on this tanka. "marathon runner of the year" I like that one.
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ReplyDeleteLove the first one!
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