Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Tuesday, September 19, 2017

Dementia




she treasures 
those precious moments 
in the peace and quiet of the early hours
it's her time to dream

his demons are growing stronger
the raging becoming unbearable
harder to quell
meds not working

all she can do
is breathe in the sea
fill her eyes with blue
fill her ears with the wind
pack her mind with beauty
and escape through her pen


Midweek Motif - Poets United


14 comments:

  1. At least she has an escape. Wonderfully written.

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  2. That is so much opportunity, this "all she can do," this caring for self and grounding in beauty. I believe that under the dementia, a person survives and I hope peace thrives.

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  3. all she can do is revive herself...beautiful.

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  4. Yes, that happens for me too, sometimes. Through the pen I would achieve peace as I've done so before. Great write!

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  5. This is a beautifully written, powerful poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.

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  6. Oh and how wise she is, to know how to do this. A wonderful poem.

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  7. wow that last stanza of the escape is beautiful

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  8. 'and escape through her pen' ~ shivers ~ an impactful, indelible line of poetry ... haunting ... that's going to stick with me.

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  9. Writing goes quite a ways to temper real life demons. Beautiful, Rall.

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  10. Howdy! Do you use Twitter? I'd like to follow you if that would be okay.

    I'm definitely enjoying your blog and look forward to new posts.

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  11. Writing helps me I know that. What's sad that peace, like happiness, never lasts.

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  12. In the end maybe all we will have left is our own poems to self. Nature can without a doubt help us.

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