Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, May 9, 2018

Rainfall




large plops of  rain
fall on sizzled parched earth
the skies open
torrential rain pelts down
like golf balls hitting the tin roof
the drought breaks
trees and plants breathe a huge sigh of relief
fat bellied frogs in chorus croak in shrills
the tanks fill up to overflow
woohoo full baths tonight

Midweek Motif  - Poets United

14 comments:

  1. I do remember knocking my knuckles against the rainwater tank to see if there was enough water for more than a flick wash and that glorious sound of rain on the iron roof. Memories of so many years ago.

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  2. Cool!
    Full free bath out in the night :)
    The rain is welcome & seems right!

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  3. The scene is so much familiar to us, specially that fat bellied frog chorus :)

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  4. delightful poem... it brought back faded mmories

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  5. I feel the relief of all growing things when the rain finally falls. I love the singing frogs!

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  6. Wonderful! I can feel the relief and joy.

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  7. Wonderful! Such a wholeness to bathe in.

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  8. I am especially taken with the fat bellied frog chorus!

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  9. "woohoo full baths tonight" - how wonderful this must be, a gift from the heavens.
    I guess I am spoilt, watering the plants yesterday and lazy I am, I was praying for rain and down she came today!
    Enjoy your bath!
    Anna :o]

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  10. fat bellied frogs in chorus croak in shrills
    the tanks fill up to overflow
    woohoo full baths tonight

    The right moment for the bath of a lifetime!

    Hank

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  11. Rall, thanks for sharing about your dog. I can well understand the pain of that parting. Amazing he knew you were there. That must have been terribly hard. The dog in my poem belongs to someone else. I walked her all year as a kindness as she was cooped up on a porch too much. But one cant spend time with a dog without loving them, so when her owners decided to give her away my heart broke a little......i will miss her, but even more, i worry she will miss me. Sigh. I still grieve over Pup, so i know the pain of the situation you shared lasted long. Thanks for sharing it with me.

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  12. that's so much delight....waiting for monsoon!

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  13. After the dry season, rain! A cause for celebration!

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  14. Love your opener:

    "large plops of rain
    fall on sizzled parched earth"

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