i remember
those summer days at curl curl
you left too soon
i remember
you being dumped by the waves
shrieking with laughter
those summer days at curl curl
were a wonderful time in my life
i miss them so much
you left too soon
the sun does not shine as brightly
since you departed
Heeding Haiku with Chevrefeuille - MLMM
A sad lament. Yes, they left too soon, and I also remember those sunny days.
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Nice series of haiku. As said by Annell they sound very sad. But in a way you have caught also the beauty of sadness.
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