Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Tuesday, April 9, 2019

You Are My One Temptation

Mid Week Motif - Poets United




cinquain


you were
my temptation
i am recovered now
took a while to exorcise you
six years





it's hard
ridding yourself
of a big pink doughnut
such a delicious temptation
i did

13 comments:

  1. __ I enjoyed visiting your blog and reading your Cinquain, this rarely seen poetic form that began long ago by Adelaide Crapsey. Nifty!

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  2. Yes. I feel this! Good song, too.

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  3. I know exactly how you got rid of that tempting doughnut. Ha!

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  4. I completely understand. That pink blush, those alluring sprinkles, and dear goodness! that first bite into deep fried doughy yumminess. I haven't been able to exorcise the want. I just run from it... weeping with the desire to come back.

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  5. I know the feeling! Powerful write ❤️

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  6. Wow, congrats on overcoming the doughnut. I am not strong enough. It is my worst weakness. Especially doughnuts. The ones with jelly in them. Gah.

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  7. Gluten intolerance ended my love affair with donuts. I shed some tears.

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  8. sweetness as well as sweets is my weakness ;)

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  9. Oh, that kind of temptation is hard to resist!

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  10. Luv this fun approach to the prompt. Nice music too

    Much⚘love

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  11. My temptation came in the form of a double-chocolate doughnut, but I totally hear you. Fun read. :)

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