Mind Love Misery's Menagerie
WORDLE # 295
If You Forget Me....Pablo Neruda
sails live sweetness remember day boat
think stop forget know nothing always
my little boat
sails towards you
it wont stop
nothing can make me forget you
i will remember you every day
your sweetness will live with me always
i know
you will think of me too
Beautiful. I particularly love that your poem tastes of Neruda's style. Makes me want to pick up one of his books and do some rereading... I think I will.
ReplyDeleteLovely. I prefer your "nothing can make me forget you" over Neruda's "If...you forget me...I shall already have forgotten you." Of course, love doesn't work that way. Thank you for sharing your own favorite for the Wordle.
ReplyDeleteYour poem has a sweetness, too.
ReplyDeleteA very sweet poem of love!
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely. Some loves never fade away.
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteA lovely little poem about love ... cheers, Rall.
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