you said
when you are around me
you are always tripping out
in one way or another
the sky is bluer
the ocean is greener
the wine is sweeter
so i thought it would be ok
to tell you how very ill i was
i wasn't prepared for the
deafening silence stony and grey
Lovely to be someone who inspires another to feel everything is enhanced in your presence. Suh a contrast, in the closing lines, to the silence, "stony and grey." Well done.
ReplyDeleteThe pain of silence in the last line tells another story.
ReplyDeleteThat last lines stzbs at my heart Rall — wow.
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