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Thursday, November 2, 2023

Moving House.....SHADORMA/CINQUAIN


 moving house

too too many times

back breaking

memories

of doing it very tough

yet i'm still here (just)

 

but now

i have a friend

who will help me move house

so i suppose i am lucky

at last



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6 comments:

  1. "yet i'm still here (just)"
    That's me. Love how the meter works with this line! I can totally relate to needing a friend, to remembering to ask and giving people a chance to be friends. Such a delightful little poem, a truthful observation. (I smile at hearing this song again.)

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  2. I love the same line Susan quotes. Me, too. SOOOOOOO tired! Nice to have friends to help one move. I have been lucky that way too.

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  3. Oh my yes! Moving is definitely back breaking. Friends at such a time are definitely appreciated! I love the picture!

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  4. Such friends are gems. That white VW reminded me of a red one my father drove in Zambia.

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    1. Fiat 600 !. Although pleased to know your Francophile French speaking academic Dad drove a red VW....very groovy:)

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