- “tranquil (nodoka, all spring).”
- #2: “cats in love (neko no koi, early spring).”
- #3: “birds enter clouds (tori kumo ni iru, mid spring).”
TANKA 1
a tranquil setting
wattle blooms early again
springtime has arrived
sydney dresses up for spring
always wears her sunday best
TANKA 2
these two in love cats
think they are doing it tough
because their slaves serve
"canned" salmon not fresh sometimes
and the birds make too much noise
TANKA 3
noisy butcher birds
if only they would enter
the clouds and stay there
instead of interrupting
our cat naps with raucous squawks



Aww I adore the cats in love, 3 great tankas
ReplyDeleteGreat lines and wonderful photos, Ral.
ReplyDeleteNice series, Rall.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Rall. I love your cats! My two cats cuddle like that too. It's so sweet. 🩵
ReplyDeleteThree great verses ..the cats and birds are delightful 💜
ReplyDeleteI love your humorous verse and the picture of the cats.
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