she almost dropped her knitting
it was like a coming of the light
she was not expecting this
after all these years together
she had no idea
george was a dancer
ORIGINAL POEM MARCH 2024
What's Goin On....Coming of the Light
george
had no idea
after all these years
she was expecting
it was like coming
almost dropped the light
was so shocked
Ha ha ha ha ha!!! Brilliant!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rosemary. Pleased we share the same sense of humour !
DeleteTsk! Tsk!
ReplyDeleteOh George. lol
ReplyDeleteThe perfect reversal, Rall. And really really funny. Have a great week.
ReplyDeleteHe dances, too?
ReplyDeletePK
Priscilla, a rose between the teeth characterises the tango dance. Everyone needs a George in their lives (providing they don't have a heart condition:)
DeleteToo funny! I love the rewrite.
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