Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, May 7, 2025

W 3 # 158...Waltz Wave Form


no 
longer 
young 
she can
still dream of
dancing  
with 
a sweet   
handsome prince 
not fleet of foot   
anymore 
tip toes 
nor
spritely
she recalls 
the good  
years  
being
young

Waltz Wave Form

1–2–1–2–3–2–1–2–3–4–3–2–1–2–3–2–1–2–1;



7 comments:

  1. Well-executed! This is a tough format.

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  2. Oooh I loved this video! Your waltz wave is lovely, I feel that the unfulfilled dreams of youth, experienced and then enjoyed once again as memories in later life 💞Suzanne

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  3. Rall, this feels gentle and wistful—like the poem is catching its breath between memories.

    Much love,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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  4. A lovely waltz wave - I floated through the poem and memories washed over me...

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  5. A lovely evocation of memories. Beautifully done.

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  6. Beautifully done. The whole presentation. Just lovely.

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