CINQUAIN
" The most expensive garment you'll ever own is your own flesh" Jean Luc Godard
oh dear
done it again
he's got under my skin
falling in love at this age so
silly
there are
loads of warnings
not to do this again
especially at this age so
foolish
I love this duet! Both so accomplished, and so appreciative of each other – and a great song in the first place. Your poem adds a wry and rueful take on it, very relatable!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your poem "Oh dear done it again"
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem. Warm greetings from Montreal, Canada ❤️ 😊 🇨🇦
ReplyDeleteNice CINQUAIN, Rall. My MIL's sayings after she lost her second husband, "I've lost two mates, I can't afford to bury another."
ReplyDeleteA happy note to carry us through your words - Jae
ReplyDeleteGreat duet and also the poem going with it.
ReplyDeleteLife is truly like jazz—unpredictable, improvised, and most beautiful when we allow ourselves to feel limitless. and we can repeat it again and again and ...
ReplyDeleteOne is never to old for love, foolish or not. LOL, at least I think so.
ReplyDeleteThere are no age limits on love. Or foolishness.
ReplyDeleteLOVE LOVE you shared this video!! I loved them dueting together. AND to go with it perfect poetry!! PS, never too old for love.
ReplyDeleteLove can always stroll by and surprise. you.
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