a fizzled feint sparkthe cold fire of our love is all that remainst'was doomed from the beginningthe odds were stacked against us
Love this, I chose the Bard today too 🩷
He's wonderful isn't he:)
Nothing colder than an unblazed romance, eh?
Wonderful take on the challenge, Rall.
Heartbreaking poem, Rall! Great oxymoron!Yvette M Calleiro :-)http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
I love the Bard! Excellent tanka, Rall. ❤️
Love this, I chose the Bard today too 🩷
ReplyDeleteHe's wonderful isn't he:)
ReplyDeleteNothing colder than an unblazed romance, eh?
ReplyDeleteWonderful take on the challenge, Rall.
ReplyDeleteHeartbreaking poem, Rall! Great oxymoron!
ReplyDeleteYvette M Calleiro :-)
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
I love the Bard! Excellent tanka, Rall. ❤️
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