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Tuesday, April 14, 2026

W3 Prompt # 207....THE SKEPTICS KADDISH

POEM 1






to be 
or not to be
a very good question
with psycho loony toons running
the show




when sorrows come
they come not as single spies
but in battalions
with a mad man
at the helm

he hurls the slings and arrows
of outrageous fortune at his
imagained enemies
with sweat and grunt
whilst shuffling to his favourite tune
YMCA
entertaining his sycophants
forever the B grade game show host

he will wear the smirk 
on the other side of his face
when he shuffles off this mortal coil
facing the celestial choir


POEM 2


 BUTTERFLY CINQUAIN

Unrequieted Love

one way 
love is painful
like hugging a cactus
it's either a two way trip or
no way
she wont
compare thee to a summers day
been done better before
by someone more
gifted




8 comments:

  1. I love your use of Shakespeare! (Actually, I love Shakespear, too)
    Your first poem -- SO TRUE!!! It's funny, but so accurate. I love the imagery of him "shuffling to his favourite tune
    YMCA"
    The second poem -- I love the form you used. It's perfect. And the poem is so true, too.

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  2. I'm thinking of the "other side of his face."

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  3. Really enjoyed your take on both of these 💞

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  4. i always remember his hotels going into bankruptcy and his corporate show series with his famous line "your fired"... so combative never holds back.... and then there's love ever so prickly ... Shakespeare writes so eloquently with a second sight

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  5. I’m a big fan of Shakespeare and you did a great job love both poems ♥️😃

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  6. Rall, I love the channeling of the Bard!

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