Rallentanda

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Thursday, May 21, 2026

The Skeptics Kaddish W3 Prompt # 212

CINQUAIN

she wakes
her legs don't work
she can't walk what else can 
go wrong well it seems just about
everything







5 comments:

  1. I'm thinking that mug says it all.

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  2. Rall, the way “what else can go wrong” turns into “just about everything” feels so sadly real to me 😔

    Much love,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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  3. Rall this is a tense piece - the fragmented structure give it a raw, stream-of-consciousness feel - the internal panic is visceral- thanks so much for sharing - sending love ♥️

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  4. hi, Rall❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by our beloved Reena, is now live until Monday:

    W3

    Much love,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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