he says
hello each week
as a sweet reminder
a kind lovely considerate
young man
she would like
to meet up one day
unlikely
never mind
she will play schumann for him
each phrase a love note
she smiles her message
via the stars her fingers
still perform magic
Rall - this captures a sense of longing, bittersweet acceptance, and the quiet power of unspoken feelings 🙌
ReplyDeleteLove these lines - she smiles her message
ReplyDeletevia the stars her fingers
still perform magic
Wonderful and a perfect mix with Schumann ✨
ReplyDeleteA lovely snapshot in time - 2 people who almost meet..
ReplyDeleteSuch enchantment throughout.
ReplyDeleteThis is so lovely, Rall. I hope they get to meet some day. 💕
ReplyDeleteRall, I really love how the music becomes her way of speaking love in “she will play schumann for him / each phrase a love note” because it feels very real to me 🎹
ReplyDeleteMuch love,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com
Wonderful poem, Rall!
ReplyDeleteYvette M Calleiro :-)
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com