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Wednesday, September 30, 2026

The Skeptics Kaddish... W 3 # 231

CINQUAIN

hard slog
hard for poets
hard for  the sensitive
life is hard full of cruel bastards
hard fact




4 comments:

  1. Blunt truth, hard hurts ...๐Ÿ’ž

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  2. Very true, life is indeed hard. ๐Ÿ‘

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  3. There's something refreshing about how blunt this is, no dressing it up, just "hard fact" stated plainly. I like how it moves from the general ("hard slog") down to specific people who feel it most, poets, the sensitive, before landing on that final line like a verdict. Not every poem needs softness, and this one earns its bluntness.

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  4. "Hard for the sensitive" indeed. I am sensitive but recent idiocies have desensitized me - my outrage has taken over. Thankfully, Mother Earth is where I turn for beauty and solace and she never disappoints.

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