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Tuesday, July 13, 2010

Poetry On Wednesday POW PROMPT 11



POW PROMPT 11
I wrote a sequel to Prevert's 'Dejeuner du Matin ' poem for this week. I though it would be fairly easy to do but found it difficult and revised it several times.
No doubt it will be continued to be revised.Looking forward to seeing you in your French hats!
PS
I don't have French punctuation marks on my keyboard.Feels wrong not to use them!

UN SIGNET DES FLEURS FANEES
A bookmark of wilted flowers

Fleetingly she revisits
an old dream
Reawakened by a news item
or something in print
Only to remember
les reves sans espoir
are best slammed shut
in books

La verite s'est revelee
comme une fleur du mal
Les lis jaunis
poisonous yet liberating
She had been awarded the
leading role in
L'Etre et Le Neant
She was the wife that never was
She was the mother that never was
She was the friend that never was

With resignation
With acceptance
She joined the slow march
to the guillotine
Found a break in the line
and veered off into the crowd
She created her own world elsewhere
secret,beyond reach,unassailable
Immured in self imposed solitude
her carapace now cement rendered
She began to write
She found joy in the natural world
Elle n'a plus pris sa tete
dans sa main
Elle n'a plus pleure


Translation
Les reves sans espoir...dreams without hope
La verite s'est revelee...The truth revealed itself
comme une fleur du mal...like an evil flower
Les lis jaunis...yellowing lilies
L'Etre et Le Neant...Being and Nothingness
Elle n'a plus pris sa tete dans sa main...She no longer puts her her head in her hands
Elle n'a plus pleure...She no longer cries

Friday, July 9, 2010

Wednesday, July 7, 2010

POW PROMPT 11


LANGUAGE SPRINKLE SERIES...FRENCH

Bienvenue

Here is a poem by Jacques Prevert , a well known and popular French poet. I love the simplicity of his work.

Breakfast

He put the coffee
In the cup
He put the milk
In the coffee cup
He put the sugar
In the coffee
With a tea spoon
He stirred
He drank the coffee
And he put down the cup
Without speaking to me
He lit a cigarette
He made rings
With the smoke
He put the ash
In the ashtray
Without speaking to me
Without looking at me
He got up
He put
His hat on his head
He put on
His raincoat
Because it was raining
And he left
In the rain
Without a word
Without looking at me
And me I placed
My head in my hands
And I wept

Write a poem in the style of Prevert with some French sprinkles. Please provide a translation if you are going to use big chunks of French .I look forward to some very varied and interesting poems next week. A toute a l'heure (See you later)

Dejeuner du matin (Breakfast)

Il a mis
Dans la tasse
Il a mis le lait
Dans la tasse de cafe
Il a mis le sucre
Dans le cafe au lait
Et il a repose la tasse
Sans me parler
Il a allume
Une cigarette
Il a fait des ronds
Avec la fumee
Il a mis les cendres
Dans le cendrier
Sans me parler
Sans me regarder
Il s'est leve
Il a mis
Son chapeau sur sa tete
Il a mis
Son manteau de pluie
Parce qu'il pleuvait
Et il est parti
Sous la pluie
Sans une parole
Sans me regarder
Et moi j'ai pris
Ma tete dans ma main
Et j'ai pleure

Charlotte Gainsbourg

Tuesday, July 6, 2010

POW PROMPT 10 ...Cliched Claptrap


At the end of the day
At this point in time
The truth of the matter is
it will be an uphill battle
to identify the foreign object
in your eye

You have taken this to another level
You need to find out who you are
There will be outcomes in your
key performance indicator optical region
basically from pushing the envelope
and smashing the glass ceiling

I just wanted to touch base with you
not make a groundbreaking medical discovery
I know this camera is at the cutting edge of technology
but even so, we are not on the same page

I have issues with your attitude
You need to own your emotions
get in touch with your feminine side
your backside, your grass roots
Basically the bottom line is to
confront your demons
win back your self esteem with a
good ego massage and a voyage of
self discovery
Find your inner self,leave your outer self
at the doors of perception
It's the journey
journey
journey
journey
that counts

We all have to move forward
Left
Left
Left Right Left
These recurring bouts of cosmic wobbles
are going to leave you visually challenged
unless you seek a support mechanism
You are in denial concerning your self medication

These things happen for a reason
Don't just talk the talk
walk the walk
I have to run
I need closure
Have a nice day
Lurve you
Lurve you
Lurve you

Don't you just lurve the talk?

Thursday, July 1, 2010

POW PROMPT 10

The prompt for this week is the above photo. This should challenge the imagination.Hopefully the image will inspire some surreal and original responses.It is time for something a little mad this week.
See ya Wednesday with bells on.
PS
The cartoon is for the teachers in the group.

I Don't Wanna Play In Your Yard