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Rallentanda

Friday, November 16, 2018

Erasure Poem - Neruda

If You Forget Me 

I want you to know
one thing



Portrait by Katherine Jeanne Wood

if you stop loving me
I shall stop loving you 

do not look for me,
for I shall already have forgotten you.

If you decide
to leave me at the shore
I will set off
to seek another land.

But (after a time)
if you feel that you are destined for me
ah my love, ah my own,
in me all that fire  is extinguished
your love will be without  mine.





Imaginary Garden with Real Toads


From the Latin word for “patchwork," the cento (or collage poem) is a poetic form made up of lines from poems by other poets. Though poets often borrow lines from other writers and mix them in with their own, a true cento is composed entirely of lines from other sources. Early examples can be found in the work of Homer and Virgil.

Found poetry is a type of poetry created by taking words, phrases, and sometimes whole passages from other sources and reframing them as poetry (a literary equivalent of a collage) by making changes in spacing and lines, or by adding or deleting text, thus imparting new meaning.





Wednesday, November 14, 2018

The Penny Droppeth Or The Enlightenment of An Ageing Poet



 and you would never have managed any of it without
the support of the women in your life...dear sir



the wife




the mistress


i have done a few things
in my  strange little life
without mr. dicken's
impressive virtues
but then
cleaning the pantry
writing poems
sorting my jewellery box
writing more poems
making meatballs
reading poems
doing piles of laundry
making lists
day dreaming
may not be perceived as significant
or quite in the same league

when a poet gets older
removing her rose tinted specs
making touch down to earth
after a life time spent in the clouds
she realises that a
lot of these affirmations
by famous men



are nothing but furtive ways
of keeping a woman
chained to a subservient position
as carer and nurturer
(dogsbody)



(service with a smile)
so that  a man can fulfill his potential and dreams

 

  And So Say All Of Us....Geoffrey !

Mid Week Motif - Poets United

Tuesday, November 13, 2018

Aussie big-wave legend Ross Clarke-Jones nearly drowns in Portugal



heart stopping moment
at fifty one not so smart
fortune smiled that day

Haiku Horizons

Sunday, November 11, 2018

Cherita For Toby




it broke my heart to give you away

after years you found your way back
you had walked for miles to find us

unimaginable grief and sorrow followed
which has never left me
i had to send you back again


imaginary garden with read toads
 Marian's Fussy Little Forms




Wednesday, November 7, 2018

Becky Sharp




becky sharp
a fictional character?

i went to school with becky
i was surrounded by beckies as a student
beckies inhabited my social life for most of my adult years

thackeray  knew becky like a second skin
she has survived for centuries darting in and out of our lives
becky and i parted company long ago
for a fictional character she was hyper real and ever present
besides living a novel was just too exhausting






Midweek Motif - Poets United

Friday, November 2, 2018

For The Weekend

they're in to win
dancing irish jigs
greek style

Haiku Horizons - 'game'