Read Write Poem 108
Prompt...random words from a music dictionary
The chord and the cadence
forming a string quartet with the
Busoni boys set sail
in a beautiful legato boat
in search of tierce de picardie
an island in the sonata sea
Inhabited mostly by poets and weavers
it was owned by Major 3rd who won it
in a poker game from his cousin crescendo
now diminuendo'd and rallentando'd
from too much vino and vivace
Musicians lived there exclusively once
but were exiled to the isle of apoggiatura
for creating dissonance too many disputes
between the neapolitan 2nds and the french 6ths
Appogiatura was run by Barbra Seville and Bessie May Mucho
two heavily made up mature mime artists with bee hive hairdos
who painted all the buildings daffodil yellow and lipstick pink
as a token of appreciation to Winston Churchill who provided
them with little luxuries during the war
There were constant complaints from neighbouring islands
because of noisy counter tenors and prestissimo partying
Barbra Seville and Bessie May Mucho were not fussed as long
as boat loads of daffodils and lipstick arrived regularly
from the mainland to boost morale
On reaching tierce de picardie
the cadential 6/4 quartet
sat on the beach hugged their fiddles
and played poco pizzicato watching
the fireworks shoot star bursts
from nearby appogiatura isle
All seemed well but the Busoni boys
secret party animals sub ponticello con brio
were already planning an escape
their violin cases crammed with tutti and brass
were eager to rendez vous with the gorgeous grace note girls
Candy Wrapper, Courtney Act and Fairy Moans
Hi Rall,
ReplyDeleteWell, what a swell bunch they are! And I detect your nod to Weaver's Winston tale. Great fun this! Of course, one has to know the terms well to create such sublime music.
Derrickins,I'm not accustomed to such effusive comments from you.Thankyou.I'm still in Sydney and it's still flooded up north.Weather still
ReplyDeletegrey and rainy here mostly.I hope you're keeping warm and snug in all that snow..it's very conducive to being bookish and writing lots of poetry I suppose.
Saw that movie about Keats today.Nice props but
not very good..I fell asleep in it..
So very fun! Even for someone like me that knows NOTHING about music! I LOVE the names you gave those tarts, "Barbra Seville & Bessie May Mucho"...hilarious! Keep up the great work, dear, and keep dry! (read about your weather...)
ReplyDeleteAh - the old tierce de Picardie - haven't thought about that since my time in Music college! Love your clever poem rall - nice to make contact, do call again.
ReplyDeleteI'm not musical inclined but this delicious piece leads me to believe it is time to become more familiar with these lovely words that sing among themselves! A delightful story, as well!
ReplyDeleteThe best thing about these words is that you
ReplyDeletedon't really have to understand them for the poem to make sense.They roll and sing as Tumblewords said amongst themseves.Thankyou
all for your comments.
Clever kid, clever. And you included your own nom in among the mix.
ReplyDeleteI love the gals, especially Bess
I was excited about your use of musical terms, and was entertained. Wonderful sounds (how could they not?!) and those rogues are my favorites, I'd carry their "bags. violin cases crammed with tutti and brass..."
ReplyDeleteWhat a fine collection of stanzas that build to a lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteA veritable symphony of joy!
nice use of those words....geez you made me get out my dicitionary....and call up my frien dly cello player...thanks Rall
ReplyDeleteNicely done! Your use of your words give a rather whimsical quality insofar as sound as concerned. I would really like to hear this read out loud.
ReplyDeleteAnd I could not help but picture the mime's beehives in daffodil yellow and lipstick pink.
Artfully done. I enjoyed reading this.
-Nicole
Today, I went to the beach with my kids. I found a sea shell and gave it to my 4
ReplyDeleteyear old daughter and said "You can hear the ocean if you put this to your ear." She placed the shell to her
ear and screamed. There was a hermit crab inside and it pinched her
ear. She never wants to go back! LoL I know this is completely off topic but I
had to tell someone!
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