Are you an artist?I love what you did with this.
Succinct use of the words, and brilliant presentation!
I like the idea of "half-eaten debris swarming about me since I was child". Concisest of concise!
Half-eaten debris is definitely not a pretty sight!
Thats a beaut! Like that buxom lady!timeless flies search for fries
love your creativity.beautiful poem!my entry is here
hi rall, oh yeah, love a woman with backbone... everything abt this speaks of power... dorothy calling
How is it that debris keeps circling like plastic oceans? She looks like a bawdy librarian - the type that... oh, never mind. A clever piece.
I count 46 words. damn, you're good.pearls and, is that a coach bag?
I need at least 30 for a challenge,50 is good,never done 100 but am thinking about it.When I choose the words,I will put them up on my blog and you can give it a shot too if you like,Barbara.
A bawdy librarian that ? I wish you had completed that sentence Tumblewords:)A bawdy librarian who could rip the pages from a novel with a look?
Ha, Dorothy it is Ms P Pie!
I've been looking for the legal dock ever since I saw the priestly dock used. Here it is. :D
Damn. This is fabulous, both (all) image and poem. Love the look of it all, the sounds, too. ("Damn" is high praise in my vocabulary, BTW.)
Well, I'll be damned! Thanks Deb and everyone for you damn generous comments...see ya round like a rissole!
Are you an artist?
ReplyDeleteI love what you did with this.
Succinct use of the words, and brilliant presentation!
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of "half-eaten debris swarming about me since I was child". Concisest of concise!
ReplyDeleteHalf-eaten debris is definitely not a pretty sight!
ReplyDeleteThats a beaut! Like that buxom lady!
ReplyDeletetimeless flies search for fries
love your creativity.
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem!
my entry is here
hi rall, oh yeah, love a woman with backbone... everything abt this speaks of power... dorothy calling
ReplyDeleteHow is it that debris keeps circling like plastic oceans? She looks like a bawdy librarian - the type that... oh, never mind. A clever piece.
ReplyDeleteI count 46 words. damn, you're good.
ReplyDeletepearls and, is that a coach bag?
I need at least 30 for a challenge,50 is good,never done 100 but am thinking about it.
ReplyDeleteWhen I choose the words,I will put them up on my blog and you can give it a shot too if you like,
Barbara.
A bawdy librarian that ? I wish you had completed that sentence Tumblewords:)
ReplyDeleteA bawdy librarian who could rip the pages from a novel with a look?
Ha, Dorothy it is Ms P Pie!
ReplyDeleteI've been looking for the legal dock ever since I saw the priestly dock used. Here it is. :D
ReplyDeleteDamn. This is fabulous, both (all) image and poem. Love the look of it all, the sounds, too.
ReplyDelete("Damn" is high praise in my vocabulary, BTW.)
Well, I'll be damned! Thanks Deb and everyone for you damn generous comments...see ya round like a rissole!
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